學英文時看圖寫下了這首五行打油詩，老師的評語是：Excellent！（這充份表現了英國人的幽默）
Cats hate rats
Rats are trying to get rid from cats
Rats want to make friend with cats oneday
Then cats say
We could be friend after I eat you, rat
音韻模式分析：AABBA
學英文時看圖寫下了這首五行打油詩，老師的評語是：Excellent！（這充份表現了英國人的幽默）
Cats hate rats
Rats are trying to get rid from cats
Rats want to make friend with cats oneday
Then cats say
We could be friend after I eat you, rat
音韻模式分析：AABBA
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October 26, 2006 at 10:49 am
pcheung
改左少少：
Jack hate fat
fat never trying to get rid from Jack
fat wants to make friend with Jack oneday
Then Jack say
We would be friend after I cut you, Jack
October 27, 2006 at 12:05 am
addie
是否應為get rid of?
October 30, 2006 at 11:10 pm
Miss Taipo
pcheung, 多謝回應，還贈以此詩！
addie, 問得好。我要翻查功課，看看是否抄錯。